In the story, a day’s wait, written by Nobel prize winner Ernest Hemingway we meet a nine-year-old boy who lives in America. One day the boy falls ill with influenza, and the story tells about the misunderstanding between the boy and the narrator of this story, his father.
The short story focuses about Schatz, the nine-year-old boy, who spends a whole day in bed due to illness. Schatz father calls for the doctor, who takes the boys temperature, and it turns out to be one hundred and two degrees. Schatz is given some medicines and is told that there is nothing to worry about, unless the temperature goes over one hundred and four degrees. The boy stays in bed, but it seems like he is not quite present. He stares out in the air, and does not pay attention to his surroundings. After a while the father takes the Irish setter out for a walk, but when he returns back home Schatz refuses to let him in to the room, fearing his father would become ill as well.
In the end the boy asks “how long will it take before I die?” His father answers confused “people don’t die with a fever of one hundred and two”. The dialogue goes on, but it turns out that some boys in Schatz French class had told him that you can’t live with a temperature of forty- four degrees, and he had one hundred and two. Schatz had prepared him self for the death all day, but little did he know that they use a different thermometer than the boys in his class. On Schatz thermometer ninety- eight is normal, while thirty- seven is normal on theirs.
In this story Hemingway uses long sentences for descriptions, and short sentences in dialogues. He also relies his on realistic dialogues as a method of characterization. Hemingway’s writing style is simple and direct, for instance he writes dialogues like the characters actually would have talked. This story is a good example of Hemingway’s writing style. He is personal, direct and he doesn’t exaggerate for effect. He writes as it is, and as the situation most likely would have been in real life.
As one of the first writers, Hemingway expressed his ideas in new and different ways, especially his way of writing dialogues. This was because he rebelled against the traditional Victorian literary style. Among others he was called “the lost generation”, based on their new writing style. This has been an inspiration to many other writers. You can say that he had an influential style of writing.
This short story is based on a similar event in Hemingway’ s life, where his son had a high fever and acted in a similar way as Schatz does in the story. This is an example of how facts can become fiction. I believe that it might have helped him knowing how he should express himself, and make it more realistic, considering he has experienced it himself.
This short story shows us that a clear misunderstanding appears between the boy and the father. They talk about, what Hemingway has described as, “it” together, not knowing that they have two different views on what “it” is. The boy is talking about death, while his father believes they are talking about the disease. An example is when the father asks his son why he doesn’t go to sleep. The son answers “You don’t have to stay in here with me, Papa, if it bothers you”. “It doesn’t bother me” replies the father, unaware that the son is talking about his death. I can only imagine that the son feels like his father doesn’t care for him, while Schatz tries to be brave and not show any fear. He attempts to suffer in silence.
Since the narrator voice is the father we are forced to see everything through his point of view, and we never get the chance to learn about the son’s thoughts. Although Hemingway writes direct and simple, he makes the reader use his or her imagination to understand his thoughts. In “a day’s wait” he challenges us to use our imagination to understand how Schultz think. This is a subtle part of the story.
The purpose of this story is to understand the importance of how a misunderstanding can have real consequences. And also how it may lead to many changes in Schatz mind. Even though Schatz father shows concern for his son, he fails to understand the misunderstanding, and the fair in Schatz mind. The story also tells us about the son’s heroism, and how he attempts to show no fear even though he believes he will die.
Personally I liked this short story because it initiates several important themes, all which we can learn something about. Like for example how a misunderstanding can lead to a conflict, and how we should try to be more open about our thoughts in stead of suffering in silence.
-Emma